VUmbral

So yesterday I was able to finish the first draft of Chapter 2!  I am pretty excited about the head way I have made in the past few weeks on this script.  But now it is time to go back and edit Chapter 1.  Once I do that, I will probably go on to Chapter 3. I got some ideas on what I should be adding in and where, and with some of my friends acting as beta-readers, I should have a lot of insight as to what is confusing, vague, wordy, and the like. ONWARDS TO MS WORD NOTING!

So I started looking around DA for artists that draw my interest... hehe... 'draw'.  And I found a few.  I put watches on these individuals and then requested a commission from one of them. I have been working on my manga script now for about three months, and only in the last week have I suddenly had the realy urge to write more.  I thank Ultraspank for getting me on the right track.  I was having problems with the first chapter, and it never felt right, no matter how I thought about it.  I was focusing on setting the stage: the politics and background story for the 'present' story. It was suggested that I start at a later part of the stori